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of love |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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compelling this elevated language of real life of loosing you of love oh… heart of darkness where for probability contends an imaginative ascend and assimilated genre hybrid adaption engaging prose walks to the other end to distract a double indemnity name dropping sensibility and free will both intimate as a baptismal bowl generations flow through birth & death admittedly a roguish millenium echoing bredth our moon colonies willing to risk Calgary gave granite rock to the soul belonging to the places we walk & dance and make love as children who believe oh mysterious macabre that thrills rugged trails leaving the booth empty so fires could burn while spirits fall into dreams oblivious and I was trained to the depths of conscienceness a slave to your wants your desires your spirit that wander persuades damnation misery vagueness and ill defined rantings of naked swims.... tearing up the ground pouring salt on wounds will tomorrow knock on my door like a child of sunrise with Sunday Morning arms clothed in their best harness your hymn books propped on my window while waterfalls prey by association strutting a mascarade and we grab our Monday hats just north of a "tour de will" where light cries closing a day in darkness without you... flashbacks of silk-weaving extra lightness in the soul inducing guilt granting insanity who would enter this awakening with hungry beginnings and eyes watching God in a precise mental condition skipping over dismembered rose blossoms smelling like some vegetable garden where fresh and dewy trails grew up making sad reminders into small lakes of summer where vacations and weekends brew Starbucks coffee ahhhh aroma can you see it? and I the ghost town at the fuel pump changing prices on the sign thinking of the time we were kids buying ice cream for a dime motion detectors circling bright orange fingers wearing ears in hopes that removing my coat would bring almond firewood to a checkboard green save my heart save the rains save long hikes in blue skies where flashes of light believe the buzz of need where you and I were grabbed by the breast of moon and held captive for awhile... oh, the insanity you sarcastic fool dim wet mornings put on their boots I need physical pain to keep from remembering oh please, sir pierce my madness with a gentle kick brushing snow away wrapping me in the scent of your cloths every bone in my body wants you I will stay the night love you like chicken soup Extremely warm and utterly hearty |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"wrapping me in the scent of your cloths every bone in my body wants you I will stay the night love you like chicken soup Extremely warm and utterly hearty" Love is, as you have so aptly penned. Can't get past that last verse!! Nice write Lee J. JL  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
your words are like water to a parch |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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