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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Intimate Portrait How completely fearless are the arms of Mother Nature Bringing great winds surging life with blissful favor Voices of her waters soothing the tone of mankind Slumbering on debts which may sometimes devour our time Her lantern's ballet with power in their candle operatic wings To terrace the earth a place of suavely equated gardens Gems of dominion like the God of her glorious deep Crown the footsteps of full moons while we passion in our dreams Soft her matted floor screaming colors of heavenly scent Bizarre selections of multicolored paintings, verification of her greatness Trickling down poignant harbors our precious eternal voyage Peacefully tumbling through warm breezes of life Outstanding milieu of seasons infused with birth like a midwife Unshaken in love, by an act of grace unfolding gestures of summer Knowledge of porous earth by odors of mountainous climbs & perils She is our might, our glimmer of suggestion most intricate thoughts hour-glass on a hill or glorious portal to some tropical isle Be astounded by morning, before dawn, while she sleeps Like the silence between two words, gathering inspirational deep She is the very human force of man, his labors and his mind The pulse of light, knowledge, experience and of continuous time She is a unvarying intimacy wrapping us in her afghan Wandering with livelihood dwelling within the heart of man Reflecting voices spurring communication with sound Green crest of the hill playing nature's music profound By Lee J. © 2002 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Soft her matted floor screaming colors of heavenly scent Bizarre selections of multicolored paintings, verification of her greatness" Nicely painted, LeeJ. Our Mother Nature sure is beautiful! sigh, if only people would really treat her with the dignity she deserves.... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
A most fine ‘write’! I LOVE: “Mother Nature…. surging life with blissful favor(!)…”; “…her waters soothing the tone of mankind…” ; AND, I am exceptionally fond of: “Peacefully tumbling through warm breezes of life Outstanding milieu of seasons…” PLUS, the wonderful last line!: “Green crest of the hill playing nature's music profound(!)” Serious, sustained applause!! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Breath-taking imagery, Lee J.! Gee, it's good to read your poetry! Sure wish I could get around smore often! Take care! Until we meet again~hugs,misce' |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
..."our precious eternal portrait"... Great lines LeeJ. Loved the title, loved the write. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Natures beauty is indeed a work of art and Lee so are you words Hope |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
oh yes, indeed~~~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"She is a unvarying intimacy wrapping us in her afghan Wandering with livelihood dwelling within the heart of man Reflecting voices " like where this takes the mind and the idea it forms.. wel done..the whole of it..a tempting read |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Trickling down poignant harbors our precious eternal voyage Peacefully tumbling through warm breezes of life" Nice writing Lee J. JL  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I sometimes do but it's mostly so very hard to highlight passages of your writes. The weave of your words results in a marvelous tapestry and this one in particular shows every detail. You're amazing! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Outstanding piece, Lee!   ....jo |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
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