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Fresh Walk.
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Fresh Walk. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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To walk through interchanging mindsets, freedom upon me,but regret shading into my inner soul. Green patchwork valleys will be my haven, to escape a shadowed mind. Stygian clouds i will let slip across the horizon. Aurulent, relucent sunlight i need to infuse my very soul. Awakening, refreshing, allowing me to glister again?Beaming radiating love to entangle insouciantly my inner grace, through the lazer beam sweep of my eyes and show autumn colours of my diffident smile. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
wow, wow, beautiful and welcome back. wonderful read. Tomtoo |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I am glad that you didn't leave for I would miss lovely poetry like this one. Alison |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very lovely writing, Paul!  ....jo |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
This 'write' is very, very fine...in oh so many ways! serious, sustained applause!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aha! The illustrious wordsmith is back in the family fold and with a "Fresh Walk" in life! You know that I'm a fan of your poetry and I hope that you will be posting more! Giving you a warm, welcome-back hug, Linda  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
That's the stuff poet! Welcome back. |
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Reasonrhymer New Member
since 2007-08-22
Posts 6CA, USA |
Nice, I like poems about the inner dude in us. Very well done. Reasonrhymer |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your inner grace manifests beautifully here! Love, Margherita  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"interchanging mindsets"...and more Good to read you again, Phil. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
good to see you didnt leave us for too long |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I guess you can see you were missed. So pull up a chair, rest your wandering feet and stay a while longer. "late" |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~what a refreshing perspective~ I think I needed to read something like this today~~ thanks for sharing~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I am pleased to be able to read your words again, and this is indeed fine writing. Nicely done, sir. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Miss your words, when are you going to post some more poems?  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
& to read you is a breath of fresh air! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"regret shading into my inner soul." and "to escape a shadowed mind." Nice writing, Phil. Hope you are well. M |
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