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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2007-09-17 01:44 AM


                




Numerical numbers,
friend or foe?
click tock,

all is lost,
cannot be found,
cloaked by darkness,

    
diamond love,
hearts cut,
memories shredded,

Dying day by day,
cell by cell,
a slow decay,

     

The seasonal stage,
displays portraits,
that can't be reframed,

One moment,
eternity changed,
broken threads,

shifting visions,
now mosaic glass,
fragments,

cutting my soul,
deeper, deeper,
blood tears,

     

A bed of glass,
I lay bleeding,
words of love,

forever in red....

memories past,
cannot be changed,
nor life rearranged,

I hold roses,
in my hands,
while sleeping,

never to see you again.

     

                


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-19-2007 05:44 PM).]

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2007-09-19 12:06 PM


"The seasonal stage,
displays portraits,
that can't be reframed,

One moment,
eternity changed,
broken threads,

shifting visions,
now mosaic glass,
fragments,

cutting my soul,
deeper, deeper,
blood tears,"

Extraordinary write… Shades of Shakespeare
mingled with shadows of Poe.  And very artistic to boot.
Great presentation and writing.

JL

Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor.
~Proverbs 22:9 NLT

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2007-09-19 03:09 PM


Thank You JL....what a compliment to be

placed in  the same sentence as Poe and

Shakespeare! Two of my favorite poets!

  


You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

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