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Khe Iem
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since 2007-10-14
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0 posted 2007-10-20 12:12 PM


THE BLACK CAT

by Khe Iem, translated by DoVinh

The black cat with my soul and a piece of
my rib, wakes up every morning not
washing its face, every morning not
brushing its teeth; the black cat with clay-like

eyes, opening and closing, or open
-ing and never closing, as it climbs up
and down the stairs, dragging with it my soul
and a piece of my rib, forgetting that

i had lived much darker days, since when and
why it was i had buried them in my
pocket full of allusions, gathered from
many different tales, strung together

to make up this story about the black
cat with my soul and a piece of my rib;  
of course, that is the black cat with clay-like
eyes, not any other kind of eyes; even

as, the black cat climbs up and down the stairs.



© Copyright 2007 Khe Iem - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-10-20 12:22 PM


Khe lem... I enjoyed this tale of the black cat.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2007-10-20 08:57 AM


Don't know when you popped into pip, but welcome!

I enjoyed this in a totally dark way.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-10-20 11:26 AM


Hi, Khe Iem! ~ and a "hello" to your translator DoVinh!

This rather eerie ~ highly imaginative ~ poem fits in perfectly with up-coming Halloween!

~ That's the spirit! lol

Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug,

Earth Angel

Kalle
Member
since 2007-10-15
Posts 89
Finland
4 posted 2007-10-20 11:38 AM


It`s poetry...
Khe Iem
Junior Member
since 2007-10-14
Posts 25

5 posted 2007-10-20 11:44 AM


Dear RDB, Susan Caldwell, Earth Angel, Kalle,

I am happy for your comments. Thank you so much and have a nice day. Khe Iem

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