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latearrival
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0 posted 2007-10-19 11:43 PM



When I go out to meet the day.


When I get off the midnight shift each morning,
My face wears a brighter smile than those just coming in.

Many are not yet awake and need their coffee break,
As their face has not yet adjusted to the sun.

Until they do, they can not crack a smile.
Or exchange pleasantries of morning.

Before I sign out for the day,I gather my reserve
And stand as tall as my mature body allows.

I smile and say my goodbyes,
Walking, as tall and sprightly as I can,

Pulling myself together in mind and body
off I go to greet the sun.

I do not show my older age if I can help it,
I do not care to be acknowledged in that way.

Jo perry Oct 19 07


© Copyright 2007 martyjo - All Rights Reserved
LindsayP
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1 posted 2007-10-20 12:08 PM



Jo, you certainly have the right attitude, keep it up and have a great day.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2007-10-20 12:55 PM


I agree! a great positive start to the day! thank you for sharing ... RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2007-10-20 01:20 AM


"do not show my older age if I can help it,
I do not care to be acknowledged in that way."

Good for you!  I, however, sometimes use my age in that I stand my ground when shopping or whatever and make the younger people move away or step back.  They do and I smile.  Got to be some advantages!  

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4 posted 2007-10-20 01:25 AM


smile...

"someone" just came in to greet his day at midnight.

He was smiling too. But I think you are a bit more altruistic than he...

in fact, I KNOW you are!

(I am guessing you are a nurse?)

I know yer an angel.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2007-10-20 04:09 AM


martyjo, you are someone I'd like to know! I like your attitude and your spirit! ~ and your poem!


Linda

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6 posted 2007-10-20 10:40 AM


MartyJo~
I have been blessed to see that *smile* in person .... and you are just beaming~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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latearrival
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7 posted 2007-10-20 02:30 PM


Thank you all. I put the reasons I do all this in When my Hair was White  Just posted.

"late"

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