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Open Poetry #41
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0 posted 2007-10-16 02:08 PM


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On the corner
It’s the two story
House with white sides
And wooden eaves

A piebald dog
By the chain link fence

It is just autumn
And the air is cool

They stand
Happily together
For a picture  She is
Holding the fish she caught
He is tall and proud

They smile
Into the camera
With its single eye

That catches them
In a moment
As they are or were

When on nothing good
Would it—ever rain


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you capture a touching portrait with your words...
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