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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2007-10-16 06:50 AM



Monday Mournings

My thoughts remain jumbled
as each day brings something new,
remembering simplicity,
a life of want "less blue".

Dreams are put on hold for now,
forever seems too stark.
This road I walk, "forgotten times"
is rough to re embark.

Shadows still surround me,
the roses wilt in need
of warmth and words that coax the life
and hold the future's seed.

Words, just words to fill the time
in morning ~~ slow-down speed~~.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-10-16 07:02 AM


Maureen... beautifully expressed ... enjoyed RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2007-10-16 11:06 AM


"roses wilt in need"
aren't we all!

SmartChick
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3 posted 2007-10-16 11:15 AM


Beautiful Maureen! I do hope you get some rest.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2007-10-16 02:44 PM


"Monday Mournings" ~ You are always very good at coming up with clever titles!

"This road I walk, "forgotten times"
is rough to re embark."

~ I understand this very well.

Sending some 'angel' water to perk up your wilted roses!

Love to you, Dear M,

Linda


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with you
5 posted 2007-10-16 04:45 PM


"Words, just words to fill the time"

ahha, yes

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