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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2007-10-09 03:27 PM




autumn

fragrance from the trees
drizzles colored confetti
wildlife gathers food




[This message has been edited by Misty Lilacs (10-09-2007 04:31 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-10-09 03:47 PM


Hi, Marti! I enjoyed your autumnal vignette!

"colored confetti" ~ what a pretty and poetic description!

I have been missing both you and your poetry. Thanks for this little fall treat!

Love to you!
Linda

Misty Lilacs
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2 posted 2007-10-09 04:18 PM


Hi Linda, thank you so much for replying. This morning I watched a deer standing at the edge of the woods all the while the leaves were falling!

I have missed you also. My brain is only letting me write small snippets of poetry.  hugs and loves ...

Home is not where you live,
but where they understand you!
       ~~ Cristion Morgenstern

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2007-10-09 05:01 PM


Ooopss

i kind of went on the wrong poem

AGIAN

ahh the freshness of fall

ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2007-10-09 09:44 PM


Oh but I envy you and Ron with that view on this day, lovely Marti.
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5 posted 2007-10-09 09:52 PM


Hi Marti. I have missed you and your poetry too. This is such a beautiful Haiku, as only you can write. No matter what form or theme you write, Sweetie, it is perfect!

I hope and pray you are doing well, too. I have been thinking of you a lot. I love you, my friend.
With hugs,
Ethel

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2007-10-10 12:22 PM


Marti, I am sorry to hear that your brain is not co-operating. It must be very trying for you. However, I must say that you have written a couple of gems in the last few days!

Don't give up writing. Keep trying! ~ Even if you are only able to write "small snippets". They're wonderful snippets and it is always a joy for your friends and fans to read your poetic offerings ~ be they great or small!

Love you!

Linda

Margherita
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7 posted 2007-10-10 12:39 PM


Dear Marti,
this is sooo beautiful! Oh you watch the deers, how magical!
May you be fine, lovely and cherished poetess.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

Misty Lilacs
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8 posted 2007-10-10 03:26 PM


Many, many thanks to all who responded to this little poem. I am most grateful and so glad to be back at PiP!!!

hugs to all, Marti

secondhanddreampoet
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9 posted 2007-10-10 10:10 PM


very pleasant 'write'!

[fine minimalistic capture
  of Autumn essence]

applause!!

P.S.: I love your choice of "P.I.P.-land" UserName
         as well (very 'poetic'!)

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Gaia
10 posted 2007-10-10 10:52 PM


I love it!
Interloper
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11 posted 2007-10-12 11:41 AM


Awesome!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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12 posted 2007-10-12 12:31 PM


good read
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