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Offer of indiscretions
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Offer of indiscretions |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
If you were offered instant gratification no idiosyncrasies no strings attached If you were offered physical contact Would you submit to an offer so bold If you were a woman in my position Longing for touch to be held at night If you had relinquished that part of yourself For it to come back consuming with desire Would you accept this gentle offer Only to know it may be one night Would you go on alone and forgotten Or unleash this passionate lion on fire Would you regret one nights indiscretion Or decide with this pleasure you can't do without Could you live with never having met her Knowing this man just cheats on his wife Is this a man worth knowing and having Or has he done this many a time I think I'll wait for "my Mr Right" Otherwise me and myself will be just fine. |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
A touch is just a touch without meaning, its the emotion that makes the touch loving, wait it will be worth it. |
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Sekishu Junior Member
since 2007-09-17
Posts 36 |
This is very deep, I like it alot. It brings to light something a lot of people probably have to think about at one point in their lives. |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Dennis thank you! |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Sekishu I'm glad you enjoyed! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Many women have been in your position, or if fictional, this predicament. Another woman's husband? hmmm.. stay clear..It means nothing to him but so much to you. wait for the real thing.. sincerely, "late" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's good to take the time to ponder in such cases ... a delicate topic. Well done. Love, Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
another well done poem from a beautiful writter ARCTIC WIND |
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spunkygirl Junior Member
since 2007-09-18
Posts 46 |
Late arrival Thank you for the visit and opinion, I Agree! Margherita I am so glad you came to visit again, thank you! Artic Wind I am glad you enjoy my poems, Thank you for the compliment! |
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