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Open Poetry #41

Something Found In Notes

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-07-19 10:10 PM

.

all night
rain fell
on the small town

to the sound
of distant thunder
rings formed
on the water

becoming
silent metaphors
in ditches
beside the road

.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2007-07-19 10:46 PM

It's raining here...I love it...
this was awesome!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2007-07-20 09:52 AM

You made me think. Thanks!

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

3 posted 2007-08-01 12:19 PM

John

This is beautiful
Simple beauty

You are an artist

Alison

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2007-08-02 02:38 AM

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Thank you all

Alison,

I am not creative,
merely reflective.

Thanks again

John

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2007-08-02 10:21 AM

Thunderstorms and oceans are my favorite things...

a thunderstorms while at the beach is outstanding.

Love this that you wrote.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

blake ricket
Junior Member

since 2007-07-31

Posts 17
Michigan, US

6 posted 2007-08-02 11:06 AM

Very moving. I love the imagery

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2007-08-02 06:20 PM

I enjoy your reflections, John~~

M

elfine
Junior Member

since 2004-06-08

Posts 35
traveling

8 posted 2007-08-10 10:13 PM

the rings ... very vivid.

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