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Like a pact
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Like a pact |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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It’s like a pact that breaks the seal and scatters tears from out the feel for saddened is the life force shield that mourns upon this worldly field. They said it best those poets past; how love can break the strongest heart and follow in the steps of time waiting for that last goodbye. I’m out of love for one above and ‘tis a backward shove of love into the dungeon of belief where lives that monster, grief. I, I, should have known better; love falters so and stutters and leaves the end a-dangle in life’s unholy tangle. But I know love’s symphony plays unfaltering in memory until the wild rose blooms new life from the pain of a goodbye. Oh, my love, wait for me! Helen / 3 September 2007 (Just myself in another’s shoes) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I, I, should have known better; love falters so and stutters and leaves the end a-dangle in life’s unholy tangle." Life and love: a tragedy of errors. Great write. JL  Blessed are those who are generous, because they feed the poor. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
It is, JL, but it really shouldn't be - it just shouldn't be! Thanks so much for the read. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was really Good!!!!!!!! |
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