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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Secret There is a secret behooves my face Old as time never moved its place I’ve searched the fringes of my mind And to myself have been unkind I searched the stars and searched my dwell I looked in heaven, looked in hell The answer seemed impossible Attainment seemed improbable It seemed to me outside my clutch A vision just outside my touch An endless path, endless discuss Yet part of life my omnibus A rainbow reaching to the clouds A puff of lace a colored shroud A faith so strong where nothings wrong Two souls that meet and sing one song It is the hand that wears a glove Whose touch will offers up, just love |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Whoa, a hell of a heavenly write  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That hand doesn't know any other way  Good morning m'friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Sharon, LOL Are you sure about that. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Seymour! Just beautiful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"A rainbow reaching to the clouds A puff of lace a colored shroud A faith so strong where nothings wrong Two souls that meet and sing one song It is the hand that wears a glove Whose touch will offers up, just love" Oh my this is so lovely!  &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick Thank you dear,  Nancy You are a love. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
A rainbow reaching to the clouds A puff of lace a colored shroud A faith so strong where nothings wrong Two souls that meet and sing one song It is the hand that wears a glove Whose touch will offers up, just love See More... I loved the entire poem, but this part really caught my eye...sheesh, hope I can put it back...my eye, that is? Seriously, loved this sentiment...wonderfully penned |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ For that you get a big and |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...So lovely!!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you sweety. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You cheeky thing you! LOL, now have a great weekend both of you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I'll try, cheeky? |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Seymour, Looks to me like you are on a quest for the Holy Grail again. I sense a little irony, spiced with humor and wit to complete the cocktail. I love the following two lines: The answer seemed impossible Attainment seemed improbable possibly because by reversing the assumptions it spells out what I have found for most of my life: The answer seemed improbable Attainment seemed impossible Loved the poem (excuse my mind) LOL Ivor |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivor Good observation and good response, thank you for your time and reply. |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Another keeper Seymour. Thanks for another great read. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
sewasham As always I do my best. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A faith so strong where nothings wrong Two souls that meet and sing one song It is the hand that wears a glove Whose touch will offers up, just love ~*~ Not many might ply a sigh such as you. But you do it so gently!   |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... Two souls that meet and sing one song I so like these lines!! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB I did too. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
and I love these lines... "There is a secret behooves my face Old as time never moved its place" sweet dreams Sir Sy! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"It is the hand that wears a glove Whose touch will offers up, just love" And, not the glove that wears the hand; To love, 'tis all there is for man. Loved this poem, Sy. The question of our being, our seeking....and the answer, all in this wonderful poem! ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, You always pick the ripest fruit. iliana I love the way you think. |
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