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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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pre-dawn blackness like a murky ink well murmurs labyrinthine passages through time glowing like a digital clock pinging against my door like bullets eventually making soft soothing harmonious noises like a dim candlelight flickering fluid gestures of illumination moving toward one great expression I wonder if God paints the darkness of time warps dissimilar so man cannot venture in? it swarmed around me, beautifully sunken depths like endless eyes searching for someone to read pulling me with all of it’s might I felt amusement, at what I had forgotten while this velveteen entity, sipped me like a memory every muscle in my body went hobbled and I dove through the densely packed pitch I felt someone drop to their knees beside me sitting, bonelessly, their thoughts curling up into my mind, then blown out and carried on the wind…hugging my feelings as if they had arms… “it is the touch of people”, I realized, in curious expression… our mission and accomplished successes digging into the soul of information blurring minds of conditioning traditions slowly, I was willing to let go of all I knew and for a moment, no perhaps many I became less and less fearful of what I didn’t know, or understand I crawled deeper and deeper Deeper still into the opening where there was more and more a feeling of homecoming….wild wings gazing at faraway tomorrows… burning the heart of darkness nothing to fear, it’s a spreading brilliance of it’s own kind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your guess is a s good as mine, enjoyed the read. Good morning sweet. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
as always LeeJ, you leave me in thought and awe....hugs |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The shades of darkness have their own comfort  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I wonder if God paints the darkness of time warps dissimilar so man cannot venture in?"  I think so. (As said in Hoboken “Love this one mucho!”) JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ.........As always you define your feeling and feather it with such amazing words that I can almost fly too.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wonderful! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Your thoughts in words spread wwith brilliance Hope |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very well written LeeJ. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"wild wings gazing at faraway tomorrows…" your work is amazing |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LeeJ, this is awesome. Felt like I was right there watching your discoveries. Much, much enjoyed this, and saving it, too. *hugs*....jo |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
eventually making soft soothing harmonious noises like a dim candlelight flickering fluid gestures of illumination moving toward one great expression Siyo LeeJ is it I wonder the discovery of self sends us into the wondering dark seeking the light of better ways? blessings
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