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Open Poetry #40

October Sky

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2007-04-07 07:49 PM

The rose of the wind,
That never seized,
To nestle her breath,
Through the October sky.

The goddess,
The purity of pearl,
Found below the sea,
Embarking upon its ever-nascent light.

A timeless fury,
To the tunnels,
That tailor light,
Through her hips,
Up through her peached skin.

She flies,
When the sun hits the sky,
And sits along the skyline,
Her eyes touch the season’s trail,
To the snowy path,
Of a smile woven,
Through the winds distant tracks.

The October sky,
Where it stands, then dances,
From her fingertips,
To the grounds heavenly touch.

The goddess of October sky.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

1 posted 2007-04-08 01:33 AM

"The October sky,
Where it stands, then dances,
From her fingertips,
To the grounds heavenly touch."

beautiful. what a vast horizon view! and who stole the pearl and throw it high up?

enjoyed happily

TerryW
Senior Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA

2 posted 2007-04-08 01:42 AM

Beautiful! I love the imagery...

Wonderful Write! Thanks for sharing ... my day is starting a little brighter already!

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2007-04-08 05:10 AM

ooooooooo, now this is gorgeous!

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