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TAKE MY WINGS
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TAKE MY WINGS |
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little dream Junior Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 10 |
IM WAITING, TO FIND THIS HOLE IN ME TO BEAST THE MAN, THAT HAUNTS ETENITY A SHOULDER TO BREAK, LUNGS TO DRY WITH THESE BROKEN WINGS, I CANT FLY TAKE MY WINGS, BUT DON’T TAKE EVERYTHING TAKE MY WINGS, BUT LEAVE ME HOPELESSLY ITS WHAT YOU WANTED, TO DIE OF SIN LET MY DEMON FRIENDS, COME IN IT TOOK ME HOURS, TO FREE A SLAVE IT NEVER CROSSED MY MIND, TO MISHAPE A THOUSAND PRAYERS, BUT ONE IS SAVED LET THIS MAN, BE DISMAYED TAKE MY WINGS, BUT DON’T TAKE EVERYTHING TAKE MY WINGS, BUT LEAVE ME HOPELESSLY ITS WHAT YOU WANTED, TO DIE OF SIN LET MY DEMON FRIENDS, COME IN SUFFER FROM, THE BURNING BUSH LET THE LAMBS DIE, A SIMPLE MUST LET NOAH DROWN, LIKE ALL THE REST WHY TO JESUS, WAS THERE A TEST A WORLD ENDING FAST, WITH LOST SOULS WHY DOES EVERYONE, HAVE TO GO TAKE MY WINGS, BUT DON’T TAKE EVERYTHING TAKE MY WINGS, BUT LEAVE ME HOPELESSLY ITS WHAT YOU WANTED, TO DIE OF SIN LET MY DEMON FRIENDS, COME IN COME AND TAKE ME |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
IM WAITING, TO FIND THIS HOLE IN ME this line was great! the poem is kinda dark and gloomy...I guess when one sees the word "demon", it doesn't really appeal I did like your first posting though...keep on!! |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
very deep, and sad..but I could feel the emotion in every word...the writings of a soul in pain. |
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little dream Junior Member
since 2007-04-03
Posts 10 |
thanks..and this was a poem of my perspective on lucifer as an angel to when he lost his wings...if you see that perspective, thats what it was. |
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