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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
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0 posted 2007-04-06 06:10 PM




The eyes,
Of the wind,
Where her hair wrestles,
With each strand that shadows her forehead.

Where beds stand,
I dream,
Dream so high,
The ceiling never seemed as low.

Words become verbs,
As we stare at one another,
Without a moments notice.

The days are never long,
As my dreams,
Await my descent into its cloudy mystique.

The kiss,
My sanctuary,
Where my life is defined,
As her feet touch mine,
Arm to arm,
Fingers intertwined,
The dream of a million breathes,
Without a single word to divide.

My eyes awake to the kiss that awaits.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2007-04-06 06:16 PM


May your delightful dreams be a reflection of your reality!

Written with such a sweet and tender touch.


EA

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2007-04-06 06:43 PM


Yes, it must be a true delight when the end of the dream combines with the beginning of reality in perfect harmony.

Lovely!

Love,
Margherita

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
3 posted 2007-04-06 07:39 PM



A true dream that delights...

You have penned it well and with such silky softness that you make us dream as well.

Thank you


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-04-06 09:21 PM


impressive write

nice to read

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