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Open Poetry #40

Spring's Anthem

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-03-21 10:37 PM

       Spring’s Anthem

‘Neath wind-fountains
mixing flavored seasons
of my soul’s content
when sunlight shakes the
    ground,
I taste your happiness
on this feather-edge of
    Spring,
the forests sing
in timbered voice
their sweetest serenade
of life and love reborn.

Your spirit
is the deep, strong sea
whereupon I launch my heart!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2007-03-22 07:51 AM

very romantic!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2007-03-22 08:19 AM

"feather-edge of Spring"

yes, that's a truly welcome breath
after nor-easters, arctic blasts
and chilling romantic mishaps

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2007-03-22 08:34 AM

..."Your spirit
is the deep, strong sea
whereupon I launch my heart!"

This ending rocks!

Inspiring write.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2007-03-22 08:42 AM

A rose to you sir, words such as these,
leave marks, never to be removed!

~ARH

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

5 posted 2007-03-22 11:52 AM

"sunlight shakes the ground,"

"Your spirit
is the deep, strong sea
whereupon I launch my heart!"

I have always looking for a poem about spring.
Yours is very good. very good. It feeds my heart.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2007-03-22 01:07 PM

Absolutely Beautiful...After I read this poem I looked outside and felt a longing to head down by the river to listen as spring reaches out her hand to touch the earth...I love the way this poem made me feel...I don't think I have read much of your work but then I am not here often... but I must say I love the way the visions you paint come to life....Magnificent...**Big Hugs**

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2007-04-06 07:14 PM

oh! I love this!!

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