Rambling Eggs [Part II of Trilogy]

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2007-03-27 09:58 AM

Rambling Eggs

She leans into the last of March,
as it once again springs
into its act, pruning, melting
winter into life,

as those other eyes, verdant green,
slowly, passionately, walked into
that lean legged sky-high love of blue eyes,

each leaning into one another
in their desire,

and she knows now, how it was

of that time,
to be conceived,

with a leap of heart

when that love became her,
in December.

~*~

Trilogy, Part II

~*~

© Karilea Rilling Jungel
March 21, 2007

Trilogy, Part I /pip/Forum103/HTML/001658.html

Earth Angel
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1 posted 2007-03-27 10:34 AM

A very sophisticated piece of writing.

Karilea, it appears to me that you were conceived from a very loving union! ~ And from that union, a great light was ushered forth, Dear Sun.

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2007-03-27 10:59 AM

whoa....very impressive. I loved this, and the way it just flows down the page and melts off the tongue. Nicely penned Sunshiney one.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2007-03-27 12:35 PM

lovely second part...waiting for number three

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2007-03-27 01:57 PM

My oh my...this is gorgeous!
Can't wait for the third..
are you sure there is not more than a trilogy here?
Perhaps a series unfolding?
Beautiful lady..just beautiful writing.

TerryW
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5 posted 2007-03-27 03:47 PM

Oh, beautiful. I have to go back and find number 1 now, then I'll be waiting on number three.

Thanks,
Terry

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-03-27 06:32 PM

beautiful!!

jak
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7 posted 2007-03-27 06:58 PM

to be conceived, nice.

Jak
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secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2007-03-27 08:02 PM

I especially REALLY love:

“She leans into the last of March,
as it once again springs
into its act, pruning, melting
winter into life...”

iliana
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9 posted 2007-03-27 11:58 PM

Oooeee....captured my attention. Going to Part III...

Martie

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10 posted 2007-03-28 12:56 PM

Sissie

March, the month of growth, of seeds, of planting. How beautifully you show us how nine months grow beautiful in December.

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11 posted 2007-03-28 04:47 PM

as those other eyes, verdant green,
slowly, passionately, walked into
that lean legged sky-high love of blue eyes,

each leaning into one another
in their desire,

and she knows now, how it was

wow....

suthern

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12 posted 2007-03-29 01:44 PM

I read the first part and didn't think it could get any better... but then I read this one! *S* Breathtakingly beautiful! *S*

The Lady
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13 posted 2007-03-30 12:20 PM

"as those other eyes, verdant green,
slowly, passionately, walked into
that lean legged sky-high love of blue eyes"

I have read this over and over
oh how it captures Karilea

this work is extraordinary

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