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Fairplay
Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222
England

0 posted 2007-03-20 02:51 PM


Is your life a facade?
Full of wants and woes
Seems with modern living
That’s just how it goes

Is your life a battle?
Always climbing hills
Loads of doctors visits
Bottles full of pills

Is your life in chains?
Sink before you swim
Foresight getting weaker
Eyes are growing dim

Is your life in ruins?
Long before your time
Then you’re on your own mate
Think I’ll stick to mine

Eric Davies

© Copyright 2007 Eric Lance Davies - All Rights Reserved
Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
1 posted 2007-03-20 04:20 PM





Good


John

Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
2 posted 2007-03-20 06:32 PM


Hear you on that one!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-03-20 07:26 PM


very interesting. enjoyed your "complain".
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