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Sunshine
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0 posted 2007-03-04 03:50 PM




MotherSong

Lyrics
Wellspring of song
Sung in a mother’s voice
Quavering with quiet heartbeat
Ear to breast, drumming drone settles babe
With warm melody, springs love
Sounds she may well recall
For her own child’s
Lyrics


© Copyright 2007 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-03-04 04:58 PM


Nice!  I remember those lyrics tender given and sent.  Well said!

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2 posted 2007-03-04 05:05 PM


you are a lullaby . . . a sweet lyric!  beautiful!

Hugs, Robert

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3 posted 2007-03-04 05:57 PM


Precious, SIL!  I have a beautiful picture in my head now and am hearing...."you are my sunshine....my only sunshine," a song my mother sang to me, and I in turn, used to lullaby mine.   ....jo
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4 posted 2007-03-04 09:29 PM


a memory just came

thank you

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5 posted 2007-03-04 09:45 PM



How lovely....

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me. ~

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6 posted 2007-03-04 10:16 PM


Sissie

The lullaby of a mother's love, is never forgotten.  

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7 posted 2007-03-05 12:56 PM


Wow Karilea, this is fantastic.
Rick
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8 posted 2007-03-05 04:39 AM


Dear Karilea, just lovely my friend, really enjoyed.

Rick

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9 posted 2007-03-05 11:54 AM


Karilea~
A lovely little lyrical lullabye~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -             noles1@totcon.com

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10 posted 2007-03-05 11:34 PM


Rictameter.....unlike so many other diamonds, it is so easy to forget about this form, when choosing the right basket for our words. Thank you for the poem, and for the reminder.

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11 posted 2007-03-06 09:37 PM




I almost missed this sweet MotherSong

it's filled with heart...


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12 posted 2007-03-13 05:07 PM


Wow..bump this back up cause it's a keeper!
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13 posted 2007-03-13 05:13 PM


So pretty... a cyclical song that will continue through the ages.... made me feel very warm!

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14 posted 2007-03-13 06:07 PM


Now that was simply lovely.
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15 posted 2007-03-20 07:26 PM



Tiny fingers, reach to wrap

around this warm chested Heart.

Thank You.

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