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Friendship a Simple Spell
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Friendship a Simple Spell |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"Friendship a Simple Spell" Friendship seems a simple spell though seldom understood. Those who think they know it well most likely never could. Friends, they learn to share such things that others cannot see sadness; pain; hopes and dreams... a heartfelt memory. When a friendship starts to grow till two like one will be; then and only then you'll know its true simplicity. It's not a very complex art to be studed and much read. Its a guidance from your heart and not your mind instead. . |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I liked this poem. Did a nice job in structure, and in meaning. I truly believe that the dictionary should revise it's defenition of friends. Well done Ken |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Often times, A lifelong partnership, untainted by the strings that entwine other relationships... You have lifted my heart with this simple poem. So very beautiful. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was so so true, and nicely written, softly and kindly |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely~this should be on a Hallmark friendship card.  In the midst of winter, |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Its a guidance from your heart and not your mind instead" beautifully done MoonShadow |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
Love this moonshadow. To have a friend...is to be a friend in every sense of the word.  Bea |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ken... just beautful!!! RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved this! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Too many times I have seen the onesidedness of this... Loved this a bunch!! Take care,,,JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When a friendship starts to grow till two like one will be; then and only then you'll know its true simplicity. It's not a very complex art to be studed and much read. Its a guidance from your heart and not your mind instead. ~*~ You make me think things that I haven't thought of in a long while. Kudos, poet. |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Thank you dear friends for the glow of your enjoyment radiates back and warms my soul ever so nicely. Such a simple spell entrances and captivates even the most complex of souls and curls them around one another. MoonShadow . |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You took my breath away with the beautiful simplicity of your poem. It's amazing how you tapped into what friendship means - and you expressed in a manner that made me warm inside. Alison |
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Sphinxen Junior Member
since 2007-03-03
Posts 38U.S. |
Friendships come and go the heart can come undone but a friendship of the mind is a peace left undefined I enjoyed the poem but in ways I disagree with the idealism in it. "No one now dies of fatal truths, there are to many antidotes to them."- Nietzche |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
This writing from the heart touched my heart ... feeling warm fuzzies here ... Ahhhhhh, so sweet and endearing! always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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