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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2007-03-15 08:05 AM


Rewrite, Repost:


Pretend with Me

I would the key to Ibsen’s plight
Those fantasies of reunite
To keep you by my loving side
It’s only truth that I would hide

I’ve dreamt of you in absentee
In dull and dreary ennui
And wish to close that chasm door
And fly above that canyon floor

I would with you the shadows true
And in that way perform a coup
In this I would you do the same
And meet me in this Ibsen frame

Pretend we are upon a stage
And walk and talk a common page
We’ll have each other in this cast
And be together till the last

Live this really as if true
And I will always be with you


© Copyright 2007 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2007-03-15 08:15 AM



know exactly what you feel and mean



Morning Sy...hows the weather down there?
Tomorrow snow again 3 - 6 inches...and it was in the 70's yesterday?????  That's our March, in like a Lion, out like a little lamb.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2007-03-15 09:40 AM


LeeJ
Good morning sweetie, sorry about the snow and cold weather. How about being a snow bird and catch some of this warm weather.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2007-03-15 01:39 PM



to pretend with you would be
a doll's house
and you Sir Sy...
the master builder

Ibsen and you
two of my favorites

love this

icequeen
Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
4 posted 2007-03-15 02:16 PM


"while drifting among the
gorgeous hills and valleys
in the mind of
Sir Seymour"
(from Meltdown of an Icequeen - sorry for the shameless plug but...lol.. the timing was too good!)

I’ve dreamt of you in absentee
In dull and dreary ennui
And wish to close that chasm door
And fly above that canyon floor


Dear dear Mr T...  As you can see, I adore your flights and often sneak a ride upon your wings. I've lost enough weight that you can't tell I'm there LOL {{{Hugs}}}
Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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