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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2007-03-10 05:49 PM


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The first
Warm light
Through an un-shuttered window
Reflects off a silent mirror
Unto the opposite wall

It is her
A moment
Pausing on her way
Across the room
Spring
Radiant
In her hair

One almost expects
Still even now
To hear the call
Perhaps a sigh

To see her turn
Finally
One hand beckoning
You beside her
As she goes


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© Copyright 2007 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

1 posted 2007-03-11 04:06 PM


this is such a gentle read...needs to go back up....bump
icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
Posts 633
FL USA
2 posted 2007-03-11 10:42 PM


Beautifully done, as always... I so admire the elegant style of your writing.

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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