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My Ark
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My Ark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Ark Tender embers burn within Sending churns of primal din Who’ll touch a spark within the dark? Who’ll save the lives within this ark? Blowing tinder, relight again The dying green within the glen Smoke hovers in dusty gray Blocking out our futures play Misdirecting echoes call Playing shadows ghostly maul Teardrops like an impulse wave Blight the fires of the grave Black the rims each circles brim Smothering the slim to grim One by one each tear and doubt Washing most the embers out Falling the abyss of night Imploding super novas bright |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang Sy...this is kinda dark and sad for you  enjoyed though |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
dark, perhaps...good, definitely...enjoyed the imagery...enjoyed the read |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Always two sides to a coin.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr An admirable comment, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"One by one each tear and doubt Washing most the embers out" fantastic lines on the other side of your coin Sir Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you dear, very sweet of you. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Sir T - I always read your poetry twice so that I can savor every drop. This is mellow and deep like a really fine, full, smoky Merlot. It is wonderful to see your other side - however, I know you are not but two sides, you have many dimensions  Hugs~~ Caroline |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icequeen That is true, we all have many sides. Thank you for the read and comment. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I am so glad I was able to drop in here, tonight. I have always enjoyed reading your poetry. And, this is no exception. A wonderful write as always Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick You are always a joy to see here. |
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