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dreamgal
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0 posted 2011-03-24 05:56 PM


Angels sing softly,
with tones so sweetly,
soft & white
like cotton,
there wings envelop me.


In peaceful tones,
i drift.
Soaring thru the clouds
im free,
pastel colors
rows of flowers
seem to all surround me.
In harmony they sing
"wings of a dove"
with so much warmth,
compassion & love.
The angels sing to me.

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1 posted 2011-03-24 09:45 PM


I love drifting days.  Can't say I have ever seen angels in the sky, but I sure have seen lots on earth.

Alison

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2 posted 2011-03-25 08:28 PM


well in my imagination I can see anything .
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3 posted 2011-03-25 10:51 PM


Sure you can and I am happy for you.  I wasn't really referring to you - I was just making a comment.  I am happy for those who see things that I don't.

A

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4 posted 2011-03-25 11:32 PM


This is dreamy! enjoyed
Kat >^..^<

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5 posted 2011-03-26 02:51 AM


A,


oh i know you were. I was only making my own.observation I wasnt really refering to you either LOL .

p.s. Im happy for me too thanks!!!!

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6 posted 2011-03-26 02:52 AM


woops, I mean "comment" not observation. Its late lol im tired. good nite!
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7 posted 2011-03-26 02:57 AM


Oh sorry thanks Kat! I felt dreamy while writing it. lol
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8 posted 2011-03-26 02:04 PM


Whew!  'Cause I sure would hate to step on anyone's wing tips ... errrr ... I mean toes.  Yah, I mean toes!


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9 posted 2011-03-26 02:09 PM


Of course not, Im sorry it came across that way sometimes, when you send just words across the miles it can be interpreted a different way, im not that sensitive ! lol
I hope not anyway ! Have a good day.

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10 posted 2011-03-26 11:47 PM


I am glad - would hate to hurt someone's feelings and not even have met them.  One should, at least, do that to their face -- not through words on a screen.

Loved the poem.  Did I say that already?



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11 posted 2011-03-27 12:18 PM


Allison,
I think you did! lol
We are just gonna go back & forth arent we?
I must say we are really getting to know each other lol. Anyway, I enjoy your poetry too. I will be going away next mth to the mountains for a "mini" vacation, so I'll have lots of inspiration. Im kinda ina funk now and havent been writing much. But writing to you is keeping me posting here anyway. Lol    

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12 posted 2011-03-27 01:45 AM


Guess we are going back and forth... just two chatty ones who met over PiP poetry.  I am taking off next month for a couple weeks of sun and fun too.

Nice talkin' with you.  I have enjoyed it.

A

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13 posted 2011-03-31 07:19 PM


Well I am glad you two got that settled.  It happens sometimes in our answers that they aren't received the way we meant them and it is best to clear the air.  Very sweet poem.
Alison always has such kind remarks and I wish we could get this corner more active again.  I am going to try to enter more often.  Love, Joyce

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14 posted 2011-03-31 09:03 PM


Looking at my answer I can kind of see how Allison could have interpreted that way, it did come across kinda flip. Saawweee Allison. And Joyce thank you for your response and I'd be happy to keep posting here more often I like it and I love your poems. Thank you


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