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Dublin Boy
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0 posted 2006-09-04 07:52 AM


Love is
the twinkle in God's eye,
the pure clear song of a thrush.
The deep fragrance of a summer rose
and the spreading colour
of a maiden's blush.

Love can be
delicate as a bee's wing,
as soft as an angel's breath.
Or hot and heavy as a humid night,
filled with dark intensity
as sharp as sudden death.

Is love both
liberating and confining,
a loaded trap or sweet release?
What happens when the passion fades
and routine sets in--
does love then cease?

Or does love
continue to enrich,
quiter now and more refined?
A small, still centre at the heart of being,
a sacred sanctuary
for the troubled mind?

Who can know
the mysteries of love,
why Cupid's arrow finds the faltering heart?
All I know is, without such alchemy,
my world, my reason for existence,
would fall apart.

© Copyright 2006 Bill Fitzsimons - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2006-09-04 08:43 AM


Bill~
Your thoughts on love are just sooooo wonderful~

Sharing one of mine with you -
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Have a beautiful love-filled day~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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2 posted 2006-09-04 11:13 AM


A well rendered poem, Bill.  A keeper.  Joyce
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3 posted 2006-09-07 10:51 PM


Hi Bill:

Enjoyed your poem and I suppose most of us feel as you do. Love is what makes the world go round!

Betty Lou

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Dublin Boy
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4 posted 2006-09-08 03:24 AM


Many thanks, Marge, Joyce and Trillium, for your kind comments--may love be with us all!

Regards,
Bill

Juju
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5 posted 2006-09-19 10:05 PM


So sweat!

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*    Juju     *
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2007-01-21 03:24 AM


Bill.... beautifully penned!  I enjoyed your words of wisdom here.. RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

midnightblues
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7 posted 2007-01-22 09:20 AM


Hi Bill,

Love is
the twinkle in God's eye

This is the most beautiful rendition that I've known!

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

Beasley
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8 posted 2007-01-28 08:58 AM


Very nice poem!
Barb

Vincent
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9 posted 2007-02-03 05:21 PM


I agree with everyone, love is the key to all. good write.   Vincent
Songbird
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10 posted 2007-02-05 09:44 AM


This is so beautiful... I loved it! Glad to see a new poet here.
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