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What About Love ?

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Marge Tindal
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What About Love
~*Marge Tindal*~


What about love is so compelling
as to send a heart rappelling
into the depths of another ?

What about love in a moment so weak
as to leave another with no words to speak
knowing that silence is sometimes golden ?

What about love that captivates
the thoughts of another in anticipate
of the foreverly moment of entwine ?

What about love is eternally surreal
as to leave another with the feel
that they are stronger because of you ?

What about love feels so right
that when dawn swallows the moon of the night
it finds you wrapped in the arms of one
who makes you glow anew ?

You ... you, are total love to me
as I try to be total love to you~



~Bet you can't guess that this one is for my Tweetie, Bill~
Babe ? You are about love ... my love~


© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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IWIHWT ~ and was able to present the love of my life with such words!!!

Loverly to the max, Romantic One!

Loving Light,
EO

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You are right, we would have never guessed
who it was for...   well done MT!!
Martie
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Marge/sis...you are such a romantic (HOT!) soul...I'll bet Bill's going to love this!
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4 posted 08-13-2006 04:16 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Total enveloping love in your passionate poem, Marge.  Your point is well made in the loveliest way.

   Rae
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That golden silence... when hearts don't need the words to convey their overflowing... *S*

Some memories are lush enough to sustain through any drought... thank you for turning me to these. *S*
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lucky you two
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem, Marge.  What you two have is spectacular!

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whoops--meant to save this!
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Having met both of you, Marge makes these poems toBill all the more real and special to read...what a wonderful love you two share...

~hugs to you both~
M
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Good to read about love without the whining and whimpering.  Love should be  fun and laughter. martyjo
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What about love feels so right
that when dawn swallows the moon of the night
it finds you wrapped in the arms of one
who makes you glow anew ?


it's so nice to see, romance, strength, true love alive in couples as you...

Bravo!
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Such a wonderful display of your love for Bill.  You two are very blessed Marge.

Hugs Kimberly        

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Glad to see you're still on your're honeymoon

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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well you didn't have
to tell me who it
was for Marge...
the love you share
is incredible...

beautiful poem

Daniel J D
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How beautiful and great are thou.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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beautiful.....it is wonderful to see love alive and thriving
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This is beautiful.
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nice read
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The rope breaks.
  



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Marge,  I'm with Linda, I have been such a fan of your poetry and haven't been on PIP for such a long time, it was a real treat to jump in here today and find this one.  It took my breath away!!!

I love the way this feels... I had to read it aloud.
Added to my library
Sherry  

    

Marge Tindal
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KindFriends~
Thank you all ...~

Rat~
Oh, but even if it should ... the depths of his heart would be such a nice place to fall~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The kind of love for which everyone should strive.  So very romantic, Marge.  Love, Joyce
Marge Tindal
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Joyce~
Yes, to strive ... and sometimes we are fortunate enough to seep into the heart of another and homestead there~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Marge, it does make you glow!  What is it about love that opens a poem and pours out music, kisses the heart and leaves a smile on your reader's faces?  

I have to admit, I'm sighing here.  How inricate that word Love is.  To love is to evolve... and that is a very interesting phenomenal word, too.  

Hugs,
Klassy

 
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