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0 posted 2006-10-11 08:59 PM



Before you know it, from just a tiny seed,
You grow to be a big kid,
Hanging out with your buddies, playing games all day,
Before you know it you fall in love one day,

You are thinking to yourself,
Man this feeling is awesome,
Superman got nothing on me,
Now that I got a girl that makes me feel serene,

But then those moments of love,
Turn to what you want and need,
She complains that you should give her some space,
But, you ain’t hearing right, and you argue a lot,

Before you know it, your love is out the door,
And you think to yourself, is she really worth it?
So you chase after her, for a week or two,
Now those weeks are making you feel blue,
And you got not clue on what else to do,

You gave it your all, saying to yourself,
Trying to buy some sympathy among friends,
But they just tell you, she wasn’t worth your love,
Because if she truly loved you, she wouldn’t have walked,
Telling you to live your life, and stop fretting,

In the end you think about what had happened,
Reminiscing old memories, and sweet moments,
Then one day the light bulb goes off in your noggin,
You realize that if you truly loved her,
Then you wouldn’t have settle for a friendship,

Either she became yours, or you cease to be,
At least that how I see it, in those cheesy movies.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2006 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-10-11 11:07 PM


In the end you think about what had happened,
Reminiscing old memories, and sweet moments,

my fav. part loved it good write...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace   ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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