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Alex pb
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since 2007-07-25
Posts 22
Arizona

0 posted 2007-07-25 10:45 PM



my star

as of a beauty so endless,
my words are forever,

but at times dispence
i may speak no more words of mind
at sight of your beauty will cause a spark i must ignore..
for it is my future that i must depend on...

as a true beauty as soul and mind,
your right for true love is more

i look to the stars for a wish,
this wish of true love for you,

to my star.....
my light in the darkness...

such a true love that no spoken word may explain...
i wish for a happiness unbound,

an emotion that far surpasses delight...
for i do not want it...

i desire it for you....
my star...


© Copyright 2007 Alexis Gerardo - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-07-25 11:20 PM


Aww...that's sweet Welcome to pip and might i say nice first post! Can't wait to read more.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Yogurt
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since 2007-07-20
Posts 18
Canada
2 posted 2007-07-26 11:05 AM


welcome and your poem is wonderful
hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
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3 posted 2007-07-26 03:16 PM


Welcome to Passions, it is great to see a new member great first post It was really sweet.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
4 posted 2007-07-27 09:55 AM


welcome to pip and wow that was a wonderfully different poem
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