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Teen Poetry #8

Sin No More

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-07-19 05:38 PM

Sin No More

Go, daughter, sin no more
The look of forgiveness
One he would show
Countless times in life and death

A pang of slight sorrow
As he knows what’s to come
The sins to be repeated
And unfortunate new ones made

Through a glimpse of his eyes
I see myself and sigh
Imperfect and unworthy
But loved beyond compare

And suddenly looking at sister
Small and dear, smile upon her face
I see her through his eyes
And I sigh anon

Brilliant and glowing
Wonderful and cherished
My sister Millie
A soul of infinite worth and prize

Gone are the thoughts
Though they quickly return
Of her loudness and noisy self eminence
And I can send her off

And I (try to) sin no more

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-07-19 05:45 PM

hey red...from title to finish...it was incredible! keep it up.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-07-19 10:24 PM

Aww...Red

I loved it!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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