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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2009-02-12 08:23 PM


            true natures

ancient clay vessels
empty and long forgotten...

an abandoned mirror
in a dark, vacant house…

galaxies hung in eternal silence…

serenity beyond all conception

        --- b. e. adams (2/12/2009)



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-02-12 08:35 PM


serenity...or frustration when you can't see what's hidden in that darkened mirror

another ponderful write

Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2009-02-12 08:36 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

Yes, this is a good write.  I've been in houses like that.  Old abandoned houses, lost in the woods.

Bobby

gilead
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3 posted 2009-02-12 09:34 PM


This is haunting, Bruce, Sir. I am that empty vessel, that mirror reflecting darkness, and that galaxy suspended in eternal silence.

Without me, none of these would be more than a picture gallery without footsteps along its walls.

Wow, I am moved; I hope my exuberance is understood!

art


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