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Darker Season
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since 2004-04-01
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Wisconsin

0 posted 2009-02-05 03:44 PM


The burn of the air and a warmth in my heart
Brings trembling thoughts on this day to restart
A new life, a new path and so much will change.
My reasons for living will soon rearrange
So nervous and timid as friends gathers near
A melody roars, but I cannot hear
There is no sound. No world at all.
I stand alone silent and time starts to crawl.
So many years waiting. It all comes to this.
Love marches toward me - a glowing white bliss.
No words can describe it. Her beauty explodes,
Strangling my eyes as emotion unloads.
Each step she moves closer, my mind starts to race
This moment. These people. This heavenly place.
So much to process, so much to take in.
A life-changing moment is set to begin.
She reaches me finally. This angel of mine.
Our arms interlock and our hearts intertwine.
We stand together — together at last
Joined for the future in front of our past.
I look at her. She stares back at me
A million sights flashing but she’s all I see.
My dream has come true and all that waits now
Is one beautiful promise. A permanent vow...
“I do. I do.” Forever, “I do.”
"I'll always be there. I'll always love you."
Always.




[This message has been edited by Darker Season (02-06-2009 01:59 PM).]

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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
1 posted 2009-02-05 05:29 PM


A beautiful poem for two souls intertwined for eternity.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-02-06 05:28 PM


Beautiful poem. Danielle was my daughter's name.
                             Ida

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Member Seraphic
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Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 2009-02-09 12:09 PM


Joined for the future in front of our past.
I look at her. She stares back at me
A million sights flashing but she’s all I see.

How very lovely! *S*

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