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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-03-05 10:51 AM



my eyes love your skin sigh places
but more the under side of them
where you moan from some mornings
when your soul wants to know a man

when the woman of you is restless
and leaves the lady side behind
when she feels it is ok to need more
than just the window's brim reflection

when she wants the sun to touch her eyes
to warm the love words on her lips
when just another morning momentary
is not enough for her deeper healing

my eyes love your skin sigh places
but more the under side of them
where you moan from some evenings
when your soul wants to know a man

well enough for your deeper healing


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2009-03-05 10:52 AM


I would love to have a book of you


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2009-03-05 02:20 PM


"when she wants the sun to touch her eyes
to warm the love words on her lips
when just another morning momentary
is not enough for her deeper healing"


my favorite lines~~ looking forward to the sun wants

M

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2009-03-05 02:33 PM


ms Dixie..I would be proud to be a book for you, thanks lady!!

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ms MMs, thanks babe for letting some of your sunshine bless my words here.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-03-05 05:55 PM


The muse of this "forbidden" series continues to inspire you so beautifully, that "forbidden" becomes most desirable. I love how you weave the soul into these extremely captivating verses.

Yes, a book of your poetry is highly due, I agree with Dixie!

Love,
Margherita



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2009-03-06 07:12 PM


The book on you is that people would like to have a book of you.

You should book that idea.

Sensuously masterfully written piece here.

Eric

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
6 posted 2009-03-07 06:38 AM


ms mar...thanks babe...perhaps someday a book will fall from this tree..


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eric, thanks amigo

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