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HopeS
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0 posted 2009-03-06 08:21 AM






While Embracing In Love

When a sunset bids adieu
Upon the ocean blue
Sharing in tender moments
Togetherness we value

The ocean was serenading
As palms gently sway
Within the blissful serenity
We each longed to stay

A magical moon appeared
Stars brought a glow
In the stillness of the night
Hours seemed to slow

Waves caressed the shore
As stars glow above
The silver moonlight shone
While embracing in love


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1 posted 2009-03-06 09:06 AM


this is so beautiful Hope!

very much enjoyed

passing shadows
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2 posted 2009-03-06 11:02 AM


gorgeous!
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3 posted 2009-03-06 12:49 PM


...how romantic...I really miss the ocean...
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4 posted 2009-03-06 12:54 PM


You capture romance so beautifully, dear Hope.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
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5 posted 2009-03-06 01:23 PM


Beautiful word pictures.

Romantic images of the best kind.

Eric

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