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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I could learn to love the shapes of trees on the dark side of lover places with the moon behind them making them men watching the woman of you wearing my eyes and the flavors of your kiss that differs from the flavors of your whispers when you put moments on over long sleeves and uncover your charms without revealing there is always rain after I see you as if it knows how you whet my mind and it helps make everything we just imagine reality if we just look through the reflections I closed my eyes when you touched my thigh and you looked away when I touched yours as if we both knew the sensations were sins but god could yell at us about that later if he was able to wake us from our dreams _____________ daark (forbidden) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Geez, DS, this is gorgeously sensual. I'm keeping this. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"there is always rain after I see you as if it knows how you whet my mind" ...such a great line...once again, you amaze...love the word-plays |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms midnite..thank you for the read and the keep!! ___________ steavenr, thanks guy, I appreciate your reads |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
politics be damned, trickle down theory alive when hand touches thigh. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
policktics always seem to succumb to touch..thank you indi |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You have a way to express sensuousness that sprinkles the whole scene with innocence. God just knows and won't yell I bet! Awesome! Love, Margherita |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
divine inspiration is an earthly reward... you-god-a-gift.... thanks for sharing it. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend ___________ ms nymph, thanks babe..don't be a stranger?? 1ventura is always around ya know. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I thought I was reading poetry until I felt fingers on my skin. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Dark You have long arms. They reached clear up to Alaska. "as if we both knew the sensations were sins but god could yell at us about that later if he was able to wake us from our dreams" I doubt it. That comes later. Enjoy yourself like I did this poem. Eric |
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pontyjim Junior Member
since 2009-03-06
Posts 40Ontario, Canada |
top notch, as usual. Such a gift for vivid images.  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
or long something ... God, I make myself laugh sometimes with the stupid things I think. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
BETTER THAN GOOD, MY FRIEND...ONE OF YOUR BEST. JWESLEY |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san... I love how you think..I think..thanks babe _____________ eric, thanks guy _________________ ponty' thanks for the read ________________ jwesley, thanks amigo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
as if we both knew the sensations were sins but god could yell at us about that later if he was able to wake us from our dreams _____________ Some dreams are worth whatever yelling they may cause. *S* This is wonderful! *S* |
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