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gdcod2player
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0 posted 2009-02-22 07:22 PM



America where’s my dream
What happened to what I believe?
The feelings I had for you
They keep me going strong
What’s happening, needs to go away

What’s happening to the place I knew?
Money is the only sign anymore
The peace that went away
The love that has dried up so fast
The money I had didn’t last
People would betray for just a little more
What’s wrong with me?
Am I only one that wants to be free?
I want to see the American Dream

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Juju
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In your dreams
1 posted 2009-02-22 08:06 PM


(: Nothing, life is what you make of it.

-Juju

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Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-02-22 09:00 PM


For many, the dream has faded or disappeared.
One must hold on, tough it out.
We have a wonderful new President who seeks to put us back on track.
Keep the dream alive.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-02-22 11:28 PM


gdcod2player - in my opinion the things wrong with America is the idiots in control that are destroying it.

BC

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2009-02-23 04:13 AM


I'll have some money (a few billion) printed and give it to you but I'll gaurantee you it will never really help you in the long run.

Unless you go back to work with an entire change of direction, different expectations, different attitudes and more love for your fellow man.

Otherwise there's a huge brick wall to hit head on!

Eric

Hang in there

Eric

gdcod2player
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5 posted 2009-02-23 09:23 AM


I wrote this, if any of you are reading this

realizing that the American Dream is fading away
i have realized its a dog eat dog world out there
who cares whats right or wrong
just get that few dollars, who cares if its your BEST friend
the Bush administration has screwed this country up
I'm just hoping Barak's administration isnt historically blinded and can get us out of this mess

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