Teen Poetry #9 |
Summer Storms & Wreckless Vow's (Tell Me How Do I Stop Crying) |
RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
Looking out across this storm Tell me where did i go right I'd take a penny for your thoughts If i could bring you home tonight And too think it's almost beautiful all these raindrops falling down To watch the lightning dance right across this great big land what i'd give to feel your hand brush right across my face to have you right her holding me back here in our own place There's not a second i don't miss you And i keep praying for another chance Just too hold you one last time Just to see your face But things aren't getting any easier And i cry a little more each day Baby i can't breathe without you To think i almost gave up today If you can't see i need you Then you don't know me like you should You get everything about me The stuff nobody else could So tonight i'll marry you Even though your not here We'll toast too forever And we'll even use a beer "Tonight I'll give you everything" "My Strength, My love, my life" "Through life and all your stuggles" "I'll vow to be your wife" But we both know i'm dreaming You've been gone too long The storm is slowly fading As the radio changes song So if your out there somewhere Please come on home too me I can't breathe without you Your my life, Lost At Sea..... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Awwwww... I think I'm gonna cry.. haha. I was listening to "Thinking of You" by Katy Perry when I was reading this and I'm close to tears. haha. Great write honey. Hope God brings your man home. -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
I'm so sorry Jess. And I don't know what else to say. I'm praying for you. My melancholy is purely my own |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
this is so sad and a great write... I am sorry you are having to go through this may God give you strength |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
you made me cry. Stay strong hun, the world needs you. I'm here for you like you always are for me. luv ya lots, Em {~~*~~} Emmalee Janelle |
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