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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2009-01-26 12:50 PM


Looking out across this storm
Tell me where did i go right
I'd take a penny for your thoughts
If i could bring you home tonight

And too think it's almost beautiful
all these raindrops falling down
To watch the lightning dance
right across this great big land

what i'd give to feel your hand
brush right across my face
to have you right her holding me
back here in our own place

There's not a second i don't miss you
And i keep praying for another chance
Just too hold you one last time
Just to see your face

But things aren't getting any easier
And i cry a little more each day
Baby i can't breathe without you
To think i almost gave up today

If you can't see i need you
Then you don't know me like you should
You get everything about me
The stuff nobody else could

So tonight i'll marry you
Even though your not here
We'll toast too forever
And we'll even use a beer

"Tonight I'll give you everything"
"My Strength, My love, my life"
"Through life and all your stuggles"
"I'll vow to be your wife"

But we both know i'm dreaming
You've been gone too long
The storm is slowly fading
As the radio changes song

So if your out there somewhere
Please come on home too me
I can't breathe without you
Your my life, Lost At Sea.....



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Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
1 posted 2009-01-26 08:23 AM


Awwwww... I think I'm gonna cry.. haha. I was listening to "Thinking of You" by Katy Perry when I was reading this and I'm close to tears. haha. Great write honey. Hope God brings your man home.

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
2 posted 2009-01-26 11:06 AM


I'm so sorry Jess. And I don't know what else to say. I'm praying for you.

My melancholy is purely my own

tearsoflove13762
Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
3 posted 2009-01-26 03:24 PM


this is so sad and a great write... I am sorry you are having to go through this may God give you strength
XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
4 posted 2009-01-30 10:56 PM


you made me cry.
Stay strong hun, the world needs you.
I'm here for you like you always are for me.
luv ya lots,
             Em

{~~*~~}

Emmalee Janelle
   {~~*~~}


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