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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2005-07-04 09:16 PM


“How long will it be,
Till there is a return to sanity”
Lamented the grim man in black.
“When will these colors fade
tracks of where the mice played,
when will we get normal back?”
“The bright causes my eyes strife,
where oh where is that farmer’s wife,
Can’t we find a mouser of a cat?”
So there he was in his easy chair
Shaking his head at what was seen there,
Colors lit the sky as he calmly sat.
They play.

Gloom


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-07-04 09:19 PM


I'm sure things will return to normal tomorrow Professor.
HAPPY FOURTH OF JULY!!



Thanks for coming in and joining in on the party!!

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2005-07-04 09:47 PM


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Hmm....when you ask, oh Saint of Gloom
will colors blue return to this room?
Maybe the morrow will see them revert
or not, says deVine with twitch of skirt!



[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (07-04-2005 11:20 PM).]

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-07-05 08:37 AM


Professor, you joined in the fun in your unique, and poetically special, way! I hope you had a happy 4th!



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4 posted 2005-07-05 11:51 AM


Gloom, you wrote this well
Kellie_Cantrell
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5 posted 2005-07-05 05:26 PM


Gloom, very well indeed. Enjoyed the write
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2005-07-06 01:19 PM


a little hard on the eyes...but added a little light humor wouldn't you say?


Me

LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-07-07 01:09 PM


LOL, as always, you write with such clarity, and this one was not only fun...but full of smiles...thank you
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8 posted 2005-07-07 02:47 PM


Me thinks the cat is pooped!
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