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Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going


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Those fancy plots of colors
attracted, caught my eye
much like a cat catching a mouse
but on this day the mice will run free
and my longing to have some fun
has transformed me
into a mouse
and brought me joy
on the day of celebrating freedom.

(Run and play mice. These days are yours.By the way, I love what you've done with the place.)

nice use of muffin

aim= FlyingScrew and EtherealCriminal. message me if you feel.

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sweetpoetess
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This is a cute poem. I just hope I get up Episodes 3 - 6 of my Mice Wars poem. LOL A little take off of Star Wars.

Poetry is beauty in words.
    

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2 posted 07-04-2005 03:04 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

Yes indeed isn't this fun?  Joyce
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley


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Welcome to the craziness...sometimes it's fun to be silly. Thanks for joining in!!
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


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~ and a youthful and spirited transformation you have made! Star 16

Don Juan, not only are you a lover ~ you're a funner! lol

Hope you had a happy 4th!



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