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sweetpoetess
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0 posted 07-03-2005 12:30 PM       View Profile for sweetpoetess   Email sweetpoetess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for sweetpoetess

It is a battle
Of good verses evil
Mice verses Cats
I wonder who will win
Such a battle

The mice evade the cat territory
While the cat sleeps away
They plan a way
That the cat will go down
And never forget the mice rule today

They take little lightsabers
And cut the cats hair off
As quietly as possible
So the cat won't wake
And make mice pie

Then they trade out the cats food
And replace it with the dogs
After they finish with that
They pour liquor for the cat to drink
Instead of water

For the final attack of the sleeping cat
The mice tie the cats tail
To the door
So if anybody shuts it the cat will feel it
And the mice will have had victory at last

But little did the mice know
That the cat could sense what they did
And when the mice went to hide
The cat undid evething
Everything that they had done

The cat knocked the liquor on the floor
Poured out the dogs food in a planter
Cut the string off his tail with his claw
And said I shall live another day
You lose mice. The only thing I lost was my fur

The mice come out of hiding and say
We will fight you another day cat
We will get our victory
Us mice do not give up
And they returned to their hole in the wall
To plan another attack


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1 posted 07-03-2005 12:34 PM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

I know they're cute and all of that
But I am rooting for the cat.  Joyce
Earth Angel
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2 posted 07-03-2005 12:50 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

What a tail! ~ I mean, "tale"! You have a mighty fertile imagination! Laughing Baby

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3 posted 07-03-2005 12:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Shades of 'Star Wars' with the little light sabers! LOL

cute!
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4 posted 07-03-2005 01:10 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Ah this is SOOO cute!
Titia Geertman
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5 posted 07-03-2005 04:24 PM       View Profile for Titia Geertman   Email Titia Geertman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Titia Geertman's Home Page   View IP for Titia Geertman

Lovely poem

Titia

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