How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Mice At Play Archive
 There is a Mouse in New Orleans
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

There is a Mouse in New Orleans

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 06-05-99
Posts 26302
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


0 posted 07-03-2005 07:58 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

(to the tune of....aw, you know!)





There is a mouse in New Orleans
That's not surprising, hon
But it's been the ruin of Serenity's mind
And left the girl undone.

He loves to run all over
Taunts her with his tricks
And when he moves across her desk
He doesn't squeak - he clicks.

He shows her naked pictures
And teases her to death.
He doesn't stop his evil game
Until she's out of breath.

He brings all kinds of people
Into her room at night
He's ruined her tranquility
And laughs with wild delight.

So, people, just remember
This horrid tale I've spun.
Protect your house from Serenity's mouse
Or your carefree days are done.



© Copyright 2005 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


1 posted 07-03-2005 08:02 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

LOL Well done Sir! Now we're cooking!


And I love the mouse with his 'guy'...is that what they would be called? I Googled 'mouse' and all I got was computer mice!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 08-14-2001
Posts 37801
Somewhere in time~


2 posted 07-03-2005 09:38 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

ROTFL....TOO MUCH!!!
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


3 posted 07-03-2005 09:40 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Perfect timing...there's an ad for a Mickey Mouse phone on top of the forum!! LOL
Joyce Johnson
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 03-10-2001
Posts 10059
Washington State


4 posted 07-03-2005 09:49 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

I love this and this brand new game you're playing.  Hope I'm not intruding.  Joyce
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 08-27-2002
Posts 40647
Realms of Light


5 posted 07-03-2005 10:17 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Deer Balls, thank you for the warning! Fortunately, my poody tat protects me from crazed mouses! ~ even those as be-witching as The Serene One's! ~ Mind you, it can be quite a battle at times!

Cat Vs Mouse

Loveya!
Linda
P.S. I enjoyed your humour which was impeccably  dished out ~ both rhythmically and in perfect rhyme!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant
since 05-07-2001
Posts 5297
Netherlands


6 posted 07-03-2005 10:26 AM       View Profile for Titia Geertman   Email Titia Geertman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Titia Geertman's Home Page   View IP for Titia Geertman

LOL I almost choked in my milk.
Where on Earth do you find such animations.

This is going to be fun.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 02-02-2000
Posts 28839


7 posted 07-03-2005 05:39 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

GLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE



You--m'deer, are too cute and yep, the master. (It is okay if I call you, master? )





Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 05-22-2002
Posts 1680
Washington State


8 posted 07-03-2005 06:20 PM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

hehe, that is pretty funny. Great fun this is.  
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


9 posted 07-03-2005 06:52 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Alicat
Member Elite
since 05-23-99
Posts 4277
Coastal Texas


10 posted 07-03-2005 07:24 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alicat

Hahahaha....good one, Balladeer!  One thing I don't want to think too hard on is where exactly that cord is connected.
SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 09-23-2001
Posts 7301
On A Journey To The Unknown


11 posted 07-03-2005 07:30 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Awwww Balladeer, this is a wonderful poem.
iliana
Member Patricius
since 12-05-2003
Posts 13488
USA


12 posted 07-05-2005 09:34 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

LOL........what have I been missing?
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Mice At Play >> There is a Mouse in New Orleans Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors