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LadySofia
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A lonesome dove sent adrift upon calming seas following a storm,
By the shores of thine homely birth, a noblest of concert grace,
An ocean of astronomical points, hemmed in by sentient rock,
A sun-tipped, starring sky rife in shades of brilliance,
Gentle surging along the sanded shores,
Recollection of an advent of the mind, a resurrection of thought,
Eros and Psyche, dichotomous, then whole,
Like rustling breezes in shuddering leaves,
Paired like branches, entwined in gilded trees,
Shaded by strong boughs, roots journeying deep,
Seeking water hidden beneath the greening earth,
Soft like a dream, enfolded in the cloak of sleep.

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LadySofia
Enjoyed the read.
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on the way to next world


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was this after an arc's trip
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Certainly, it could be interpreted that way. You can even interpret it as marveling at Creation, or the handiwork of God, after a difficult time in one's life. I am not one to presume upon such matters. I'm just a writer, brought up with a belief in God, Christ Almighty, and the Holy Ghost, and I believe my poetry to reflect that standpoint rather clearly, especially, in the way I marvel at Creation.


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