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Shades of Metaphor
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Shades of Metaphor I roar in nightly soar Among my shadows metaphor From mad to glad I wade In and out its plaid of shade Searching my murky dim The working of my psyches whim That hovers o’er my bare And bickers me with tricks ensnare Contrariety of men That cannot find an open glen That wonders in the mist Searching out their private gist That hosts and bides their crime Those ghosts that ride the sands of time That guides me through this dwell And tides me o’er its fires hell While I in hopeless nightly cry Drawn and quartered a bed of why |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
That hosts and bides their crime Those ghosts that ride the sands of time That guides me through this dwell And tides me o’er its fires hell excellent write....Happy Friday Sy |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very powerfully written Sy!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pleasure to read  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"That hosts and bides their crime Those ghosts that ride the sands of time" much enjoyed |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I really enjoyed the scenes you painted here. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweety I appreciate. scorpio Appreciate the read and comment. passing, Always a pleasure to have you stop by. SEA Glad you enjoyed, thank you. Pilgrimage I enjoy your enjoy, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"While I in hopeless nightly cry Drawn and quartered a bed of why" compelling work Sir Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, Thank you so much.   |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy... just wonderful words here! RDB |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, I appreciate your comment, thank you. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I read this as a metaphor of the inner mind that is full of contradictions that can and will lead us astray. Robert Jordan was correct to praise your talent. |
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