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time prophet
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since 2003-07-30
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

0 posted 2007-01-05 03:26 AM


Child! At less
Than half my age,
Something you will never be.
You should know
That words not said at night
Will present no better in daylight.
Where age is no guarantee
Of wisdom,
Albeit I would use it
As a poor excuse
To put an old head
On young shoulders.
In so doing
I try
To provide a lesson,
To be taken
Use it, lose it
Or place it
In some distant place
For future reference.
The choice is yours,
You are the one
That will have to live with it
Not I.
For I will not
Hold it against you.
But know that in gain
Of personal freedom
There is also pain.
Irrespective of which
You will also know
That your Fathers door
Will always remain open to you.


© Copyright 2007 Frank Bennett - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2007-01-05 05:58 AM


...comes wisdom hopefully, but life has a way of interfering with that

and you have to do the best you can and be there for others...

nicely written

M

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2007-01-05 06:03 AM


yes...touching write
time prophet
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since 2003-07-30
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In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees
3 posted 2007-01-05 06:12 AM


Children test a parents patience but never their love. Thanks for reading.
Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2007-01-05 06:57 AM


I can understand this write but at the end of the day the only words that have to be said are

"your Fathers door
Will always remain open to you."

Oh, and an "I love you" tagged on at the end perhaps an essential that most of us forget.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2007-01-17 05:57 AM


Frank... wonderful inspiring words you write!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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