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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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0 posted 2007-01-04 10:20 PM





oh how does your soul
rage
at the shadows of times
lost

   ~michael


oh but the stories we told each other  
I told you dreaming flannel arms  
you told me seeing purple roses    
you told me flying  
soul splitting  
finding my princess shoes
I told you I know heart joy  
is followed by heart pain  

    how zen
    you said

are you pulling my hair?

   would you like me to?

giggles make bubbles in my belly
feel like living life all over again
with you always there

   you deny lost time
   you said
   now flatten that one
   miss zen

I slapped playfully
get back to business
soulflier
  
there is time and time
to make up for

and time to waste

on each other

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2007-01-04 10:25 PM



The intimate depth of this
was like looking in on a soul's opera

and I blinked...ashamed...

and kept reading.

Yes, you were right with the first posting,
and my response...

and it is a depth that
one might not share....

but a poet?  Could.

Should.

and Has.

Thank you.


The Lady
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2 posted 2007-01-04 10:32 PM



yes Karilea
a poet could
and you are a poet extraordinaire

and I thank you
for your gentle push
and encouragement



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2007-01-04 10:36 PM


Lady
"there is time and time
to make up for

and time to waste

on each other"

Excellent

The Lady
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4 posted 2007-01-04 10:38 PM



thank you Sir Sy
I appreciate you
always

sweet dreams...

wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18
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Ky. USA
5 posted 2007-01-04 11:08 PM


I slapped playfully
get back to business
soulflier

My Lady sister you gift such joy in what you write,sharing that loving gentle part of self we far too often hide in seeking to be strong!Sigi


  granny!

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-01-04 11:15 PM



Granny, thank you so much
it seems I can't keep it inside




Martie
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7 posted 2007-01-04 11:37 PM


Dear Lady...I'm sorry that I've missed some of your Michael poems...this one was young and felt so free.  Loved it!  
The Lady
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8 posted 2007-01-05 11:28 AM




sweet Martie
thank you
it feels so young and free from here too


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2007-01-06 08:50 PM


wow... just lovely Kate!!   RDB
I love reading your work..!

Janette
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10 posted 2007-03-04 10:43 AM


"there is time and time
to make up for

and time to waste

on each other"

And not a moment wasted by me reading this series.

Delightful.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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11 posted 2007-03-04 12:31 PM



thank you Janette    

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