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Open Poetry #39

Where Can I Go Wrong?

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2007-01-04 11:20 AM

Where can we go wrong?
Where can I go wrong?
Now,
I cannot find a place,
To your heart,
I was looking for you,
My love,
But I guess,
It is too late,
To find such love,
Where can I go wrong?
My love,
Where can I can go wrong?
Where can I find you?
Once again,
My heart has been broken,
Yet,
I ven' forgotten you,
Where Can I go wrong?

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2007-01-04 01:38 PM

Hi Vandana!
Good to read you again...and Happy New Year.
This piece absolutely aches with longing and unanswered questions.
Well done.

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2007-01-04 03:27 PM

Long time, no see

Happy New Year!

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2007-01-04 04:39 PM

Nice writing...James

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-01-04 06:57 PM

Your plaintive words touched my own heart.
With every door that closes in our life, another one opens.

May 2007 be a year of wonderful new beginnings!

Loving hug,
Linda

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2007-01-04 08:25 PM

To ask such questions, to ponder, to query...

these are the thoughts of a poet to be.

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