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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Sunset On the veranda I watch as you enter Into my home You talk of rescue Return to a world I left long ago Pray Dear Sir As stars appear What makes you think I want to be found . |
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
So simple, so true. Yes. Love the sentiment.Thankyou. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. PEBBLES, And yet a little frightening isn’t it? John . |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
...just a little frightening~~  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
nakdthoughts, You bother me. . . John |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Frightening? No. Curt, to the point, no one to climb the walls one might build...yes. But to desire to have that much alone time? Perhaps, disturbing. Although everyone must take on their own needs, overall, to be understood. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love the quality time this portrayed...and that moment you experienced...fear not the want for alone time....we are a society of needing people...a society that tells us we should be a couple to be sucessful, a society that tells us, what we should think, feel, enjoy...if your happy John, with who you are, then marvel, ask not what is normal...who can tell you what makes you happy, gives you great peace...for I to, walk this path...and it astounds me, how very much I've grown from the independence, the great joy and inner vision I've accomplished...the autonomy of my own life, visiting with the who of who I am, and enjoying the company I keep... I love people, but I don't need them to be happy...and I don't need to be told what should make me happy or what should not...or that I need a husband to be complete...I am complete...and have never been happier. Fear usually comes from what can't be understood...I fathom your confidence to go forward searching the path within...some people are simply not meant to be married or in a relationship...doesn't make them wrong...be contented in life...and enjoy that light that comes to visit your veranda.... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The sky offers much beauty and inspiration. Nicely written and expressed. peace~ Reg |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
We are all bound by something, duty, conscience, love, truth, and sometimes we must all obey. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
great writing here John.... enjoyed RDB |
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