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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2007-01-02 06:54 PM


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Oh yes
That’s just what I want . . .
A sleek
Hot babe
In a cowboy hat

Away with these books
Why bother with poems
Is it black or brown
That will best turn her on

Or perhaps the fox
To rustle her fur
Will prance for Ben Franklin
Despite his gray hair

There’s so many options
What can a man do
Here’s an idea
To Hell with it all


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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2007-01-02 08:03 PM


you make me smile John~~~

M

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2007-01-03 11:09 AM


A jaded view that women should enjoy reading, too.

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2007-01-03 11:16 AM


*laughing*

This is prolly the most light hearted offering I've seen from you yet. And yeah, I chose to take it that way..cause?

It looks good on you.


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4 posted 2007-01-03 11:17 AM


cute "butt" too.
Huan Yi
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5 posted 2007-01-03 06:49 PM


Thank you all,

Just my response after seeing the same commercial
one too many times.  And so dishonest.  They don’t tell
you.  It’s like when a young woman at a bar finds out you work
as an accountant and then all she wants to do is drag
you to the floor and start making babies;
YOU GET TIRED OF THAT!

Thanks again.

John

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2007-01-03 07:58 PM


geezzz where are you hanging out John?

p.s. and I don't mean to bother you...I am  just reading you and responding.

Huan Yi
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7 posted 2007-01-03 08:16 PM


M,

Actually  I’m all in tune with Peter O’Toole
who said:  “ As one grows older relationships
become more difficult.  The thought of going through that
all over again is unsupportable so I don’t bother.”

It’s a very different world from twenty-one
and I don’t pretend otherwise.

Thanks for reading again

John



JL
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8 posted 2007-01-04 12:39 PM


"There’s so many options
What can a man do
Here’s an idea
To Hell with it all"

Great write, but don't give up...



JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

time prophet
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9 posted 2007-01-05 04:03 AM


"Just For Men" , why not women, where is the equality.
Huan Yi
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10 posted 2007-01-05 10:35 AM


time prophet


"Just for Men" is a hair dye product
here for guys

CastleGuard
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11 posted 2007-01-05 06:18 PM



DOH...

Tells you how much (little)I watch TV....LOL

If it wasn't for "24" coming soon...I would cut the cable...heh.

I tend to agree with Peter O' as well. That's why one better get it right.....early.

CG

Huan Yi
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12 posted 2007-01-06 04:26 PM


CastleGuard,

Yet most don't unfortunately,
then what do you do?  Somehow
the sucess rate is no better than when
your parents decided who you would be
sleeping with the rest of your life.

John


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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13 posted 2007-01-06 09:21 PM


John... this was fun to read!  I like your words!

RDB

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