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ManOfWolves28
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0 posted 2007-01-02 02:34 PM


The birds were chirping in December.
So much I dont remember.
There was a mud puddle full of sand
and a sand box full of mud.
I took a bike ride and
ran over a box of tide.
Where's the snow?
Wheres the frost?
Guess it's safe to say Father Winter is lost.
He and Jack Frost must be on strike or they
got laid off.
Whatever the reason December was
a strange part of the winter season.
I picked up a rock and threw it in the river.
Some how it made me shiver.
A cold breeze followed by a sneeze.
Since I dont remember much of this
poem and such,
Maybe it be best if I give my brain a rest.

-Made this up as I went. Having 9 cats inspiring me daily creates odd stuff.-

© Copyright 2007 J. A. Griswold - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-01-02 03:56 PM


Yes, December was an odd month for weather and so far....January is also...at least for Ontario Canada it is.
Good write.
Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

PEBBLES
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2 posted 2007-01-02 05:11 PM


I think its great when words just spill out,I enjoyed your write.
froggy
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3 posted 2007-01-02 05:16 PM


Hey James,
I love it. Those meows meows sure can inspire one.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18
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Ky. USA
4 posted 2007-01-02 10:05 PM



Sigi,sometimes the very best words are those simply gifted by spirit!


  granny!

LeeJ
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5 posted 2007-01-03 07:06 AM


flows the heart and mind of a poet...
well done

Juju
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6 posted 2007-01-15 08:29 PM


This was good keep it up.  I can see you have really grown.  Sorry for my tardyness

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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